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Ha ha! More amazing and crisp colours! xD I love the way the pink and brown core of the flower just pops out against the mix of vibrant yellows and healthy greens, like a bold twist in a otherwise generic setting of identical flowers. The fact that the blur of the background makes it so you cannot really make out the other flower cores really supports this. In addition, this flower has such a different shape as compared to her brothers and sisters and this really supports the title. To add on, the focus on this piece is great. Overall, it has an excellent concept ^^

However, the focal point is a bit off. My eyes seem to be dragged to the blur of yellow near center in the background (the one that looks a bit like a crab, or maybe a frog xD). Anyway, having an off center focal point is always a great effect, but I think in this case the main flower isn’t strong enough to hold it’s own against the background. It seems to just fad away and blend into the other flowers. I would recommend graying the background slightly, moving the flower to the center, or cropping the image so that the flower is more significant to the piece.

Other then that, it looks amazing as always xD Great job hun!
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*amazing xD

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:iconmatt-wltr:
great quality and amazon color ;)
well done!

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:iconcadydid:
Thank you very much. :huggle:

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Aug 3, 2009, 10:13:59 PM

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